Hey Vimoh, this is the first story I'm reading which is penned by you. I get the fact that this is still the first chapter of the whole story. But I feel that it's confusing. I didn't understand whether Aramban is a country or people of a country. I don't understand who's Timir and the people with him. Anyways I'm not gonna give up on your story. I'll continue to read it. I hope you take my feedback in a positive way.
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Hey Vimoh, this is the first story I'm reading which is penned by you. I get the fact that this is still the first chapter of the whole story. But I feel that it's confusing. I didn't understand whether Aramban is a country or people of a country. I don't understand who's Timir and the people with him. Anyways I'm not gonna give up on your story. I'll continue to read it. I hope you take my feedback in a positive way.
Regards
Tejas
Keep reading.